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The train(A journey from one heart to another)
Next day in the morning, my phone started ringing "Tum jaiso chutiyo ka sahara h dosto". I had completely covered myself under the blanket and was not willing to open my eyes, so I cut the call and slept again.
A few minutes later, again the ringing started but this time I picked up the call and answered..
Hello....I replied with a heavy voice but my eyes were still closed
Hii my son... someone replied
I was freaked so I opened my eyes a lil and saw the blur img. of someone but I could read the name there "Popu". It was kishore on the call bloody fucker. I then felt relaxe because I was expecting someone elder from my family...
Yes saale...I replied
Something happened yesternight???Did anyone enter??Did you talk to that one? How she looks?? A rapid fire had started by him..
Ohh please wait-wait-wait, Nobody entered yet and I am still under the blanket. My destiny is.......I stopped suddenly, kishore wait brother
What happened?? he asked
Someone had entered at 12:30am, I was in sleep so I couldn't see that one..Oh my god kishore, it means he/she must be sleeping here next to me... Brother i am shivering a bit in excitement, I explained what happened yesternight.
Don't say bad, not he/she just she. My heart say that one must be a girl and yaa not sleeping next to you, just sleeping next to your seat, He replied.
Should I see her bhaa..a..a.i, I stammered
No...No... No wait till that time when she'll get off the train Okk fucking idiot?? He yelled at me and continued
Just throw the blanket and wash your face with that face wash I had given to you. Do everything briskly before she open her eyes otherwise she'll get a heart-attack by seeing your this face. Just wake up idiot, he gave me his suggestion as he didn't want me to miss this chance but it was still a doubt whether the one who is sleeping in this cabin is a girl or a boy....
I moved my blanket a little so that I could get the glimpse of that person sleeping next to my seat...
Oh my goodness..hey...hey, am I dreaming!!!! That beautiful long hair, how soft they appear and she had saccharine sweet lips.They were blossom soft. Her eyes were just wow, it was seeming that the almighty must had left all his work to make such a beautiful girl.Her eyelashes were velvety and her skin was glossy. Her beauty was too captivating when she was sleeping. It was seeming that an angel is sleeping and allowed me only to behold her beauty. She was damn cute more than my best freind mauli. Before seeing you my dream girl, I was thinking mauli is the only cute girl but you won today....
{If you are reading this mauli then forgive me. It's just a part of imagination, you are still too cute😊}
She was still sleeping perhaps because of fatigue but it was a good sign for me. I quickly uncovered myself, took out my face wash, towel and silently opened the door to pour some water on my face and to get fresh before she opens her eyes...
I texted kishore.."Hii saale, you must be an omniscient.she is damn pretty brother. I am outside now and going to use your face wash.Bbye take care and thanku
Hehe...Okk Okk enjoy the rest of your journey. He texted back
I was done that time and was standing beside the door and thinking of how to enter inside..
Ohh shivam, com'on open the door.You can do it and why are you shivering she's is still sleeping. Just open it and enter idiot, throw away all your shyness and step in. Com'on do it, do it, do it.... A voice inside me was boosting me, encouraging me and did all that it could do to blew away my fear and shyness...
I took a deep breath , hold the door and opened it...
Ohhhh shit, fucking liar my inner voice because she was not sleeping.she had awakened and was sitting on her berth. I lost all my encouragement that fucking liar my inner voice has given to me but now I had no choice so I stepped towards my berth and sat on it...
I wore my spectacle and took out my novel to read it but the actual fact was that I just hold the book just to stealthily behold her. She was gently caressing her beautiful long hairs, twisting her hands and stretching her legs and uncovered herself from the blanket. I squinty watching the beauty of her. She stood up and went outside to get fresh, I guess.
I quickly combed my hair and folded the bed sheets so that it give immaculate appearance..
{After a few moments}
She opened the door and went inside. I couldn't stop staring at her but how would I initiate our chat???🤔🤔
Hello... good morning, she initiated and wished me.
H-h--h-hii, good morningggg, I stammered(fuck off I just ruined it)
Are you okay..she asked
I firmly tied up my confidence and replied "yaa of course. It's just you know I was reading a novel so a sudden voice of yours breached my concentration and this happened...
Ohhh..okay, so if I disturbed you, I am sorry for that. You can enjoy reading your novel, she replied
No-No-No, you didn't disturb me, I kept the novel aside and continued, even I was trying to talk to with you but I thought you should get fresh first so I was silent.
Is it!! Okk so what you want talk with me? She frowned and asked
I-I-I just wanted to say hello to you, i replied
Do you feel uncomfortable while talking with me and if you wanted to say hello why didn't you say it before??she asked
No, it's not like that I am perfectly fine and I am little bit shy so I didn't start, I replied with a smile
Okk, so hello, I am Radhika, she moved her hands towards me for handshake..I controlled my shivering hands and moved it forward for handshake... I am shivam..
I don't know why but the smile on my face never get disappeared for a moment and so she asked
why you smiling?
Positively dear I love to smile, I replied
Yaa good, so where is your destination??she asked
Your heart...I murmured
Sorry, I didn't hear you, she replied
I said new Delhi and yours
Ghaziabad, she replied and continued actually I had no plan to go there but one of my friend is going abroad so just for a hangout...
Wow, that's great your freind is too good and I am thankful to her...I enthusiastically replied
Wait a minute, why you thankful to her??she asked
Aahhh, I mean she care for you,she wanted to spend some quality of time with you and because of her I met you and so I am thankful...I replied with a fear in my voice
Ohh that's so sweet of you shivam..she replied
Yaa I am too sweet. Have me please, I whispered
Okk, so what you do to please yourself except this reading?? She asked
{"Shivam always remember whenever a stranger girl is asking about your hobbies, your passion and your lifestyle then she is taking interest in you" I remembered kishore words. The most experienced and demanded guy too}
I love singing and writing poetry & quotes.. I replied..
Okk so would you mind to please this journey of you and mine...she asked
I was filled with zeal from inside and thanked to kishore but before I could start saying anything my phone beeped
Wait a min. Radhika..i excused her
It was mauli's message, "Did you forget me?? Good morning idiot. How are you?? I spoke her message a lil louder
Whom you forget?? Radhika asked
Noo, nothing like that, Mauli just texted me, I replied
Mauli??who is she?? Your girlfriend?? She asked
Ohhh shit... No-No-No, she is my best freind. She was just asking me"how I am" actually it's been a long time I couldn't talk to her. The closest friend of mine, I don't have any girlfriend Radhika, I managed somehow otherwise my journey would have been stopped before get started..
Gadhi, I'll talk to you later. See if everything goes well, I'll give you a treat but if something goes wrong I'll see you Mauli... I replied with some anger emoji😠😠
But what happened?? She texted back but I kept the phone aside
So yaa Radhika back to you... I smiled
Tell me a quotes written by you...she demanded
Okk, so here is your quotes, I was saying by seeing into her eyes....
" It was merely these eyes fault that stealthily took your glimpse, I stubborn to remain silent but this stupid mouth expressed the all"....
Ohh wow Shivam, it's really too good. Your lines say something. Just too good
Yaa but still waiting for someone who could understand it...😟😟, I whispered
And later I sung a song for her which she liked a lot..
It's strange that someone who has this deep emotions which reflects from his words and voice is still waiting for someone to hold his hand... Radhika express her sentiments for me
Ohh is it Radhika!!! I smilingly replied
Yup,You are too good shivam. See The Train is on time and I am about to reach but I must say you just made my journey a pleasure one...It would have been a worst if I didn't meet you here.. thanku for that, she expressed her gratitude for me
(Why train is on time god??? can't you see my happiness, I murmured)
Just same here, you took my words Radhika... I replied and continued but can we continue our conversation when this journey get end??I mean how would I get in contact with you??? I asked with a fear
Ohh yes, Okk take my num....but before she could finish fucking phone started ringing "Tum jaiso chutiyo ka sahara h dosto"
Excuse me Radhika
I picked up the call, hello kishore
Hii my dear shivu, did you talk to her?? He asked
Yes brother, I talked to madam
Madam???Rahul asked who was also on conference call
Ohhh...is she sitting next to you??? Kishore understood the condition
Yes brother... I replied
Now plug the earphone, sit a lil far from her and switched to video call.. Kishore demanded
Nooooo, it's not needed I am Okk, I replied softly which we never do while talking to each other but that time I was in compulsion..
We are not requesting you, just do it chutiya, Rahul replied
Okk, I sat on my berth, open the back camera and was waving my hands to pretend that I am seeing them but fact was something else... Okk brother I am about to reach in few minutes so talk to you later. I cut the call
Yes Radhika, you are saying something..I asked
Yaa but let me arrange my luggage just few minutes are left to reach Ghaziabad, she replied
Yaaa Okk dear. I'll Kick your ass fucking idiots saalo, I murmured
(After few minutes)
Yes I was saying my number so that we can talk after this journey...
Yaa, yaa, okk wait ha, let me unlock my phone but how could I forget that happiness and me are the greatest rival of all the time and so the phone sensor stopped working. I was unable to unlock my phone, "fingerprint not matched" was displaying on the screen.
This is not working Radhika, just write down my number and text me but again this happened.😢😟The train reached Ghaziabad and stopped. Radhika took her luggage and started moving towards the door. I took her luggage and aksed her to write my number. She unlocked her phone and I started speaking louder 9472xxxx36..
We reached the door and she got off. It's a nice meeting you shivam. Thank you for making my journey wonderful..she thanked me again
You too dear. Train started moving and I started waving my hands and spoke louder "bbye dear" and came inside that cabin where we spend a lil part of our life..
She won't text me, I know. She'll get busy in her work and forget me. Ohh god!! Why you have planned this for me?? I was talking to myself.Okk lord I'll talk to you later, first let me talk to mauli, Rahul and kishore. Fucking idiotic nuts ruined everything.. mauli a lil, Rahul a lil more and kishore the most😠😠😠.. I took my phone to call them but suddenly my phone beeped. It was a text from a unknown number...I opened it
" Hello, Mr writer let's continue our words in this box and let the readers fill the comment box" -Radhika-
I jumped and kissed my phone. I filled with enthusiasm and so i sent a broadcast message to all of them to say this news which surely call for a celebration for them..I covered myself again with the blanket and started filling that box😁😁😊😊😊
Byeee-byeeee
8 Comments
Damn!! There was not even a single moment where I didn't smile..😍😍☺☺thank u for making me a part of it ❤
ReplyDeleteIt's an lovely piece
Thanku mauli..you always been too supportive and kind.. Thanku for being a part of my life dear
DeleteThe rhythm of story is quiet good.It feel so real!
ReplyDeleteThanku dear
DeleteHayee😊😊
ReplyDeletethe second part is osm 😘😘
Somewhere I felt oo shit ye ku then lil bit after thank god aisa hua then.
while reading your words they makes me feel them in my life nd I feel them nd as your story change from bad mood to a good mood mine mood also change from sad to happy .
it makes a smile on face its osm
But a question arise is these all r your real life moments or u were only imagine them in your story
But really its osm I love it u cant think I'm waiting eagerly for the second part of this story.
Feeling good now😉😉 love h pgl 🥰
Nd it gaves a new word "popu"
To irritate kunal😁😁
I sometimes not sleep at nights just because of few of you..I don't care whether I have a lot of request to write down or a few requests, I'll definitely write if a single person wants me to write among Millions of people..You are the part of those few ones who wants me to pen down my stories..and yaa it's all a part of my imagination😊
DeleteNice try piepi.....keep it up proud of you...😘😘😘
ReplyDeleteNice creativity
ReplyDeletespread the love😊
@Kumar Shivam....